Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extend do you agree with this statement?

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It is generally argued that the government should spend money only on services that help its people rather than investing unnecessarily in the arts
industry
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. I do not agree with
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argument though I
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argument, though I
believe that
budget
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the budget
allocated to the welfare services for the public should be significantly more that that to the development of industries
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as music and theatre. It is a well known fact that public services play an important role in the development of a
country
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. Services
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as a good medical facility and education are of utmost importance. A well established healthcare system helps the
country
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fight any disease and keeps its citizen
heathy
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
.
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, Germany due to its efficient
healthcare
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health care
facility was able to fight novel
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better than any of its
european
of or relating to or characteristic of Europe or the people of Europe
European
counterparts.
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, a strong educational system is critical for having a high literacy rate.
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encourages industries to set up their base in that location which generates employment. To cite an example, many multinational companies have set up their manufacturing plants or software hubs in India as its easy to find
quality human resource
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quality human resources
the quality human resource
a quality human resource
.
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, completely neglecting art of any form is not a wise choice either. Arts like music, painting
,
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,
theatre play a pivotal role in improving the economy of a
country
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.
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, India's movie
industry
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contributes 5% to
nation's GDP
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the nation's GDP
.
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, not promoting
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industry
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may lead to loss in the revenue of the government.
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, arts
industry
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helps to increase the fame of a
country
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and fosters a good relationship
among
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between
two nations. To illustrate, while I was travelling in Iran, I found people very
accomodating
helpful in bringing about a harmonious adaptation
accommodating
because they loved India just because of its film
industry
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.
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, it can be said that the art
industry
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helps in building a good image of a
country
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if
potrayed
represented graphically by sketch or design or lines
portrayed
correctly. In conclusion,
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quality public services with regards to
healthcare
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health care
and education is essential, the government cannot simply ignore its other
industry
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such
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as arts which is a key to drive employment and
also
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helps a
country
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to build a positive reputation at a global stage.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural enrichment
  • expression of creativity
  • promote diversity
  • enhance social cohesion
  • boost tourism
  • job creation
  • stimulate economic growth
  • improve quality of life
  • essential services
  • maintenance and development
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