The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the percentage of students that give a positive review of the different services offered at McGill University in the
years
2005,2010 and 2015. It can be clearly seen, in a general way, that all the aspects have a similar fluctuation in the range between 5-10 point
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
,
for
example
Add the comma(s)
,example
show examples
sports and social facilities percentage stay stable for all the 10
years
. Only student services have a critical increase from 2005 to 2010 (about 30%), we can appreciate that starting as one of the worst
aspect
Change to a plural noun
aspects
show examples
, it becomes the one that the student
most
Correct your spelling
must
show examples
appreciate at
all
Correct determiner usage
apply
show examples
.
On the other hand
, we can see
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
student satisfaction
on
Change preposition
with
show examples
the range of modules offered decrease slowly between these 10
years
, from 39 to 25
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
, becoming the aspect that voters like less.
Finally
, we can safely say that all the services of McGill University have improved over the
years
.
Submitted by kwarts on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: