It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that some

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of developed nations choose to engage in foreign affairs in different areas.

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some believe that people inside the country are the ones who need the most help from the

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,

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still cannot ignore people from the rest of the

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.

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many countries in the

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still have not recognized fundamental human rights.

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of those countries are deprived of their freedom and are oppressed in many inhumane ways. Many Vietnamese dissidents,

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, were sentenced to death by the Vietnamese authority, which could have been saved if the US government had tried to prevent that from happening.

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since

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of those countries are not armed and lack

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negotiating power, they are unable to claim their democracy back. By using diplomatic pressure to negotiate the terms, the

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developed nations

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citizens

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from overseas to influence their own

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in the policy-making process. It has been true in many cases that prolonged poverty cannot be solved without

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assistance from foreign

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. One product of poverty is hunger, causing millions of deaths every year all around the

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. If outside

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had stepped in and provided financial assistance, those lives would have been saved.

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to financial support, governmental organizations can help provide

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education and skills for those

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. Plenty of evidence

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suggested that the most effective way to overcome poverty is education. In conclusion,

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cannot ignore people living in distress from the rest of the

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. By providing education and financial support,

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around the

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would be able to live a better life.