The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows the average
of
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apply
the
number of vehicles that pass in the city centre per day from 1996 to 2005 and Correct article usage
apply
also
differentiate
the Correct subject-verb agreement
differentiates
journeys
made by residents
and non-residents
.
It can clearly see that in the first years, residents
' vehicle
dominate Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
this
kind of traffic, in 1996 non-
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the non-residents'
residents
' vehicle
is almost half of the other Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
one
, 5000 versus 10000, and Fix the agreement mistake
ones
this
supremacy continues until 1999, with a slight increase of
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in
the
number of non-Correct article usage
apply
residents
journeys
, that reach the peak value of 8500.
After 2000, with the introducing
of parking meters in the city centre, it can be seen as a change of trend, in these years and in the Replace the word
introduction
next
years, we see a rapid decrease of
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in
residents
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residents'
resident's
journeys
, with only a little increase in 2002.
The non
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non-residents
residents
ones
have a stable average, of about 8000, in the three year period, between 2000 to 2002, and Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
also
fall down to a value of 3000 journeys
per day, cause of the closure of traffic on Westgate Street and Park Lane.Submitted by kwarts on
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