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Some people prefer to be self-employed, whereas other like working for companies or institutions. Which is a better approach?

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Many people endeavour to set up their personal corporation or hustle to secure the employment in multinational companies. Some folks prefer to have their own
business
instead
 of working under someone, while on contrary side others would rather favour to have
job
Suggestion
jobs
. As per my opinion, I believe that best approach is to
work
 for yourself
instead
 to
work
 under someone else. Having a private company is more beneficial because the opportunities for growth are enormous as compared to jobs. If the individual comes up with a million-dollar idea and get success in it,
then
 there is a high probability of becoming a billionaire within a few years.
For instance
, Warren Buffet is a self-made billionaire who became rich by starting an insurance company and doing the trading. Starting a
business
 does ask for extra hard
work but
Accept comma addition
work, but
 the results are fruitful. Addition to
this
 the owner of the
business
 have no fix hours, he can
work
 whenever he wants to as well as there is no possibility of getting laid-off in crisis. To exemplify, currently because of pandemic so many workers have lost their
job
.
Conversely
, some people support doing
job
 because it has less risk and more security. In
job
 the
work
 hours are fixed, not like a
business
 where you must
work
, day and night.
For instance
, the
job
 hours are fixed from 9-6 and the employee
receive
Suggestion
receives
 holidays on the weekend, but for the boss 365 days are working days. Having a
job
 is less risky than having
business
Suggestion
a business
 because chance of failure of the
business
 is high. Despite of that, the productivity of working as self employed is much more as one can
work
 in their desired time on their convenient place. In conclusion, being a boss is better
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 being employed. If the enough hard
work
 is served in company the chances of having success is higher. Even the
job
 has not much risk, but it does not accommodate with sufficient growth opportunities and the growth of individual become stagnant.
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