In Britain when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care the government or family?

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Nowadays, many aged people go to nursing
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for life. There are some views related to
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and Family or
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government, which
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care. If I say based on my knowledge both have to provide equal funding only in different situations. On the one hand, it seems to me that family should pay to a nursing
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, if old person, who member of
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family, desires or has to go to it, it could be because he or she is no stranger to the family, he or she should not be abandoned for it is inappropriate to the humanity. If the family refuses to pay for it, a compulsory tax should be levied on them, for the reason that there are many things that
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should provide financing
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as education, transport, the medical system and
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boundary.
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, some events may arise which the
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has to pay for the nursing
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.
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, aged people may have not families or relatives and in
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case, the
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should take responsibility for care them. What is more, the financial situation of many families is poor nowadays and the elderly may not be well cared for in
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families, so they go to the nursing
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. The thinking of my way in
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case
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the
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should allocate financial support for them. In conclusion, I would like to say
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of all family should pay for a nursing
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, but the
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should care equally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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