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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea, some think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? Give examples of your knowledge.

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Not only the
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 bags, but
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 materials are spreading more amount of hazardous effects like land
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, water
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 and so on. To control problem, I will agree with the statement that elastic should be banned. Someone has said that every coin has two sides, just like that, everything have advantages and disadvantages too.
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 are the thing which is used on a regular basis. For so many years,
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 production has been done and its use is continuous. But as the times goes, there has been a situation that
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's destroy a process is necessary. The truth is,
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 cannot be destroyed by heat or by any means of power.
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 can tolerate the high temperature and the strongest chemical reaction. Due to the problem of destruction,
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 wastage is increasing in all over the world, which is the main reason of
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. Due to
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 waste, land
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 is increasing, because of the
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, lands are becoming infertile.
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 , elastic wastages are dumped into the water sources, which affects a lot to the marine animals and their lives. It will lead to the death of thousands of marine creatures. To reduce the corruption, there are many ways like reduction of
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 production and usages, there has to be some chemical changes which can be recycled or destroyed. Rather than a
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, paper shopping bags can be used, there are many countries who have banned the
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 in regular uses. With these ideas, we can save the marine life and will be able to stop land
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. By means of that, we can save the earth from
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. In conclusion, I would like to support the banning of
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 for the earth to stop going into trouble. No abuse so that no will be hazardous effects.
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