Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

Nowadays, a healthy proportion of individuals tend to marry and have children when they are around their thirties when juxtaposed with younger ages. In my opinion,

this

is a positive trend, as it provides people a chance to start their independent

life

with confidence before having a family

Therefore

, I support the above mentioned development. Undeniably, marriage

age

have risen

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has risen

in our day and

age

.

This

is mainly because, the most people want to choose their own path in

life

before they marry to

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before they marry

someone. To be precise,

such

people spend their time on education, personal development and choosing a career in their younger

age

instead

of making a new family, I think. In our financially-demanding world, without acquiring proper knowledge and possessing a job, making ends meet has become more difficult

Jeven

acknowledged as a supposition

given

for a person So, people who have realized

this

fact, opt

for

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to

marry and give birth later on in

life

. From my perspective, marrying around the

age

of thirty for the sake of having a permanent workplace and choosing a

nght

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night

path in

life

,

therefore

, is

positive trend

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a positive trend

.

Moreover

, I support the development of making a family later on, as

relationship

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the relationship

between family members only in

such

families can be prolonged. Precisely after the

age

of thirty people can understand the real meanıng of

life

and their

family which

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family, which

can lead to increase in numbers of happy family in society Because, most of people who

marmed

feel sadness

mourned

moaned

murmured

at their younger

age

are likely to get divorced, as

such

people tend to consider

life

as

life

in the novels

For

example according

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example, according

to the findings of Demographic Agency at the United States

last

year far more people married at around thirties have lead a successful families when compared with younger ones. In

conclusionI

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conclusion, I

conclusion I

am in favour of

marriyng

take in marriage

marrying

and having children at around

thirties

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the thirties

.

as

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As

this

may lead to making stronger and happier family, at all

Thus

,

this

is something positive thing for me