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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positve trend, while others argue that this is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#computers #education #people #positve #trend #consequences
In today's world
technology
 is playing a vital role in everyday life of each individual in
this
 world. As
this
 is helping everyone to fulfil their needs and stress free work. In
this
 20th century, people are habituated of using computers, laptops, tabs and many more devices, which making their work to be done fast. In the good olden days, people used to read lots of books and used to spend time in libraries to gain some knowledge. Whereas, due to lack of
technology
, students are forced to carry plenty of books and are allowed to prepare for exams from their respective books which are provided by the institution. On the whole, rapid growth in
technology
 is positive for human mankind, which help them to get their work done quickly. But, it may affect the future generation kids, which make them lazy and dumb. But the people who have experienced both generations will definitely feel nostalgic about their good olden days. Because
technology
 helps us to improve or gain more information, but without our notice it is making us separated with our loved ones.
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