Researchers show that overeating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, advertising for food products should be banned in the same way as the cigarette advertising is banned in many countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In recent years, many adopt a view that overeating is a detrimental

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which increases morbidity and mortality like smoking does, and the governments should

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take proactive actions.

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, the issue as to whether some types of

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advertisements should be prohibited remains controversial. In my opinion,

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imposing bans on

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commercials would be effective to

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to a small degree or extent

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extent, it is over-simplistic to say that

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approach could address the

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. There is no point in denying that commercials can effect, change or even

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thoughts.

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studies have indicated that in contemporary society, the more excessive exposure to advertisements, the stronger association between non-nutritious

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advertisements and childhood obesity rate.

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is attributed to the fact that most children at schooling ages are not cautious of information

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disseminated by advertisers; thereby, giving preferences to

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advertise

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regardless of their ingredients.

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, statics have shown that children who spend more than three hours on television with integrated unhealthy

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advertisements are 50% more likely to be obese

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compared

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to peers watching less than two hours.

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example demonstrates that excessive exposure to advertisement somehow has stimulated the consumption of unhealthy

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in children.

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, legislators should institute restrictions on advertisements targeting at young viewers to protect

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vulnerable group.

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, the root-cause of binge eating

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mainly derives

from subjective factors rather than objective ones like advertisements. Psychological researches have pointed that those who are struggling with stress, anxiety, depression or frustration are prone to

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over-consumption, because some

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can arouse

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the brain

to release

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endorphin, which

is a naturally produced

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in the body to enhance excitement, boost pleasure, relieve stress and kill pain.

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, since eating could give the feeling of euphoria,

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have determined over-eating as a psychological disease of eating disorder, commonly found among those contracting mental

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problems

resulted from

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the fast - pace

of life or fierce working environment.

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, at the heart of

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matter is the personally internal elements of managing stress and balancing life. In conclusion, emphasizing on forbidding

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advertisement may not completely solve the

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. Given that some of subjective factors are in need of being taken into account, the authorities should thoughtfully re-consider before taking appropriate actions