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Discuss is money the most important thing in life?

#money #life
Today,
money
 is the special thing which all of us need to live.
Money
 plays an important role in our ever-growing society in all respects with rising costs.
However
,
money
 is not the most important thing in
life
. In fact, in a healthy
life
,
money
 often follows behind many other elements in our
life
. From a social viewpoint,
money
 affects our
life
 a lot. We cannot live without
money
. We need to spend
money
 on eating, drinking, living and working. Even the wealthy are often
the more highly
Suggestion
the most highly
 respected members of society than the poorer.
Secondly
, from an educational standpoint
, usually only people
Suggestion
, people usually only
 having
money
 can go to school. It does not mean that the poor cannot go to school, but it will be more difficult to access literacy and deep-
knowlegde
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
.
On the other hand
, there
are
Suggestion
is
 something I've found that are more important than
money
.
First
 and foremost, it is physical health. Many people nowadays are busy with
earing
earn on some commercial or business transaction; earn as salary or wages
earning
money
 leading to skipping meals, do not eat properly or sit for a long time to solve their task. That has a significant effect on health. The
second
 important thing is personal passions. In fact, there are many children born in well-off families who have no passion for themselves. They are simply brought up by their parents and even more depend on their parents. People should balance the role of
money
 and many other factors in
life
. All things considered,
money
 is really important to share happiness.
Beside
Suggestion
Besides
, we must not forget other important things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
 as healthy and passion.
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