Scientists and technology expert seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

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The modern society tends to value scientists and technology experts more than arts related ones
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as artists and musicians. While, I believe that some underdeveloped countries pay much more attention to the scientists and technology experts and ignoring the success of others, I think that developed countries are successful at giving the deserved credit for both valuable professionals. Many undeveloped countries give vital importance to the science related experts, and
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musicians and artists are often undervalued and put in the
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or even
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place. The lack of scientific researchers and experts working for technological development
cause
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causes
the populace to credit and rely on those who can be beneficial to their country's improvement.
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, musicians and artists had to be ignored because there is an urgent need for scientific persons and experts.
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, while India put a great emphasis on science and technology for the past 10 years, Indian artists moved to relatively developed countries to earn money.
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unbalanced situation between two groups of professions will go back to normal in the future as the country
technologically develops
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is technologically developing
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, artists and musicians are quite respectful in industrialised countries and they can earn great amounts of money.
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, a balance between two distinct groups leads equality between every citizen. Both science and art related experts are credited with their good work, and
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can be explained by the fact that these countries are almost come to and end in their improvement process, and so it is time to feed their souls while important researches are conducted by scientists. The United Kingdom, is the prime example where there are quite a few buildings for opera, ballet and other cultural activities. In conclusion, equality between different professions depends on the country's level of development. I believe that, developed countries value for both scientists and musicians and artists while, some underdeveloped states merely give importance to scientists at the moment and hopefully once they are developed they can value both groups.
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