Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion

Zoos are made for the entertainment purpose for the people; children can see

wildlife

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animals live in the

zoo

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parks.

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some people believe that zoos are just like

prison

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a prison

for animals and should be kept open because they think that zoos are cruel for

animal

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animals

the animal

, as they feel sad and unhealthy when they are in prison.

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However other

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However, other

believes that

wildlife

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animal parks are made for the protection of

wildlife

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animals. In

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essay we will discuss zoos should be closed down or not.

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,

to begin

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with some believe that zoos should be closed down because it is against the mankind to keep the living organisms in a prison as zoos are

cruel because in

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cruel because

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zoo

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the zoo

a zoo

there is no any proper treatment or food given to the animal, there is limited food and medical facility available for the animals.

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also

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believes that animals need larger space where they can play but in zoos merely small four sides closed land given to the animals.

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Thus

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This

zoos should be closed.

On the other hand

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,

other

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the other

believes that

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type of parks

are made

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is made

for the protection of the

wildlife

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animals,

zoo

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is a prime place to make an animal safe and secure from outside dangers like hunters who hunt them for their meats or making leather products.

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Moreover it

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Moreover, it

is

benefits

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benefitted

for the entertainment purpose not

only but

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only, but

also

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generate some income.

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, crowd come in

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and pay the entry fees and another example is a dolphin which is widely used for shows, it is trained well and

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performs paid shows which generate revenue for their owner. To conclude, it is evident that the zoos have brought benefits as well as disadvantages to the animals. I firmly believed that having a

zoo

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in a city are beneficial people can earn their livelihood and children can learn about the

wildlife

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animal in

forest

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the forest

they cannot see.

Other

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Another

thing is government should do some necessary steps

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as proper food and medical facilities

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for

the animals.