Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extend do you agree with this statement?

These days, many

tax payers

someone who pays taxes

taxpayers

argue about where should

government

invest their

money

. Whether, the

government

spend

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spends

their

money

on arts like music and theatre, which many people perceive as monetary waste and contend that

such

investment

should be shifted perhaps in public services. I disagree with

such

perception as many

unwealthy

not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind

unhealthy

children, who are interested in

arts

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the arts

will be compromised because of it.

Firstly

, from those people’s

perspective

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perspectives

, the

government

’s

money

ought to be invested in public services

such

as better infrastructure and transport facilities. It is undoubtedly imperative for many developing nations, where better transportation and infrastructure can boost the economy;

for example

, job prospects for many individuals and contribute to the growth of

country

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the country

a country

.

Admitedly

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Admittedly

,

requisiting

express the need or desire for; ask for

requesting

money

for music and theatre activities will

disbalance

this

approach.

Nevertheless

, in my point of

view

Accept comma addition

view, such

such

idealogy

an orientation that characterizes the thinking of a group or nation

ideology

contributes to more harm than good in the

society

. As many private companies will start investing in music and theatres;

therefore

, it is plausible that

such

arts will prosper only high-class

society

.

Furthermore

, many poor children, who have

interest

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an interest

in these arts will be left-out from these subjects.

Additionally

, the

government

’s

investment

in

arts

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the arts

will not only help poor individuals, but

also

provide

talented artists platform

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a talented artists' platform

talented artists' platform

the talented artists' platform

to represent the nation on a global level.

For instance

, National school of drama, a

government

sponsored institute; has a wide reputation worldwide, where many students from all over the world participate in various courses.

This

allows many students from different part of

society

to enhance their interested

skils

an ability that has been acquired by training

skills

schools

and create more job opportunities in their future. To sum up,

although

investment

of the

government

in

public sector

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the public sector

is crucial to boost their economy,

however

, I believe that

investment

in

arts

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the arts

is as equal

for

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to

the benefit of the

society

and should not be considered as a waste of

money

.