Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea, some think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? Give examples of your knowledge.

A certain group of people, including environmental lovers believe and support the prohibition of elastic bags for shopping, as it is responsible for he contamination of fields and oceans. I tend to think on the same line of opinion. My stand is reasoned in detail with explanations and examples. Out of all the reasons, the foremost one is that
molded
how something is done or how it happens
mode
moulded
is the most harmful, non- biodegradable material which means, it is of no use after throwing once.
However
, it is
also
swallowed by animals, including marine one's too leading to their ultimate death. A good example to prevent
this
is, to encourage
elastic collection
Suggestion
the elastic collection
in all the areas by a school or by an NGO activity so that the areas can be free from
this
pliable material. Apart from
this
, there are many materials which are Eco friendly, more convenient and desist contamination of habitat.
For instance
, the use of cloth bags must be enhanced as they are capable for grocery shoppings than, polythene one's.
In addition
to
this
they are more durable than paper bags, which loose integrity of they become wet.
Furthermore
, they are re-usable, washable, easily available and cheap.
On the contrary
, some people counter claim the mentioned support.
To begin
with, its light weight and water resistant property, it
also
has energy saving quality,
for example
polythene carry bags require 70% less easily recyclable, without harming the environment. Even zip-lock bags are simply accessible on a daily basis.
Thus
, to wrap up the discussion, it can be commented that though plastic bags have enhanced benefits over its other substitutes, it plays a major part in adulterating our habitat. Henceforth, it should be ceased and replaced by other helpful, eco-friendly alternatives.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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