The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts show the aspects that tourists like the most and the least by visiting Bowen Island. It can be seen that half of the visitors shared a disappointment

for

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with

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the high cost of living, a quarter of them don't like the entertainment offered on the island, the

last

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quarter of

tourist

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tourists

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dislike

Wrong verb form

disliked

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weather

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the weather

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and food quality, respectively 15 and 10

percent

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per cent

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of people. On the other

side

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,side

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the most liked advantage is the people, in fact, 42% of tourist like it, but 35% of them

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appreciate the scenery, the least shared advantage is good accommodation, with 11

percent

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per cent

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, and it is probably linked to the disadvantages showed by the tourist. In

general

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we see that in Bowen Island, the most liked aspect is connected to the ambient and the people that live in it, but it's clear that

the

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apply

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tourism in

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place lacks

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a good system of tourism management

lindstedtTue May 26 2020

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

According to the survey
Visitors reported
The pie charts show
The most common advantages/disadvantages
A significant proportion
A small percentage
In contrast
Notably
The largest segment
Similarly
On the other hand
A major advantage/disadvantage
To highlight
Overall effect
Impact the experience
In summary
Illustrates
Reflects
Highlights

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The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause?

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