Some universities deduct students’ work if the assignment is given late. What is your opinion and suggest some alternative actions?

Some universities deduct
students
work
if the
assignment
is given late. What is your opinion and suggest some alternative actions? There is no doubt that some universities deduct
students
'
work
if their
assignment
is given late. Some people state that
this
regulation is beneficial to
students
' study
whereas
others disagree. I strongly believe that deducting
students
'
work
if the
assignment
is given late has a positive effect on their
study
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. The reason why deducting
students
'
work
if their
assignment
is overdue is beneficial to
students
is that it helps to improve
students
'
time
management. Specifically,
students
are forced to be punctual in order to avoid
the
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punishment, so
students
start to develop an awareness of
time
and punctuality.
For example
, I
have
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enhanced my
time
management skills during my university
time
when I tried to avoid my school's
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punishments on
students
'
work
in terms of late submissions. As for the alternative action, universities should help
students
make a staged
timetable
for
their assignments progress
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the progress of their assignments
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.
This
is reasonable because a staged
timetable
can remind them how much
time
they will need to complete their
work
,
thus
avoid
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missing deadlines.
This
can be supported by a recent report conducted by Oxford University that
students
who make a staged
timetable
for their
work
are 80% less likely to submit their assignments late compared to their classmates who do not. With all the points above, the conclusion can be drawn that deducting
students
'
work
if
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assignment
is given late is beneficial to
students
because it improves
students'
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time
management.
In addition
, an alternative action to avoid submitting assignments late is to make a staged
timetable
.
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