The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The three pie charts show the percentile for the number of
articles
from academic journals, read weekly by PhD
students
, junior lecturers and all other students
at an Australian University.
It's pretty stunning to see the majority of those students
pursuing the PhD
program read more than 12 articles
per week in comparison to all other students
. The figures are 80 percent
and 12, respectively.
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per cent
Moreover
, only 5 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
PhD
students
read between 1 or
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and
articles
and 15 percent
read 6 to 11. Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, a large percentage of all other students
(67 %) did the same amount of reading.
Meanwhile, the junior lecturers of 75
percentile read 6 to 11 Correct article usage
the 75
articles
, 25
percentile read more than 12 and remarkably only 1 Correct article usage
the 25
percent
read 5 or Change the spelling
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less
.
It's indeed clear that Correct quantifier usage
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students
taking PhD
program
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programs
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compared
students
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