The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts show the percentile for the number of
articles
from academic journals, read weekly by
PhD
students
, junior lecturers and all other
students
at an Australian University. It's pretty stunning to see the majority of those
students
pursuing the
PhD
program read more than 12
articles
per week in comparison to all other
students
. The figures are 80
percent
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and 12, respectively.
Moreover
, only 5
percent
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per cent
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of
PhD
students
read between 1
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and
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5
articles
and 15
percent
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read 6 to 11.
In contrast
, a large percentage of all other
students
(67 %) did the same amount of reading. Meanwhile, the junior lecturers of
75
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percentile read 6 to 11
articles
,
25
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the 25
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percentile read more than 12 and remarkably only 1
percent
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read 5 or
less
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. It's indeed clear that
students
taking
PhD
program
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did
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an enormous
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of reading as part of their research work
comparing
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compared
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to either the junior lecturers or all other
students
.
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