The charts below show one government's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in Arts events in the same years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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There are two charts shown. The first chart compares the
portion
of cultures
and education spent government in 1995 and 2005, and the Fix the agreement mistake
culture
second
one is about the number of participants joined
in Correct pronoun usage
who joined
Arts
Events in the same years.
At
the first graph, there were 4 types of education and it can be clearly seen that there were significant changes in each category from 1995 to 2005. In the year 1995, music was the biggest Change preposition
In
portion
than others and was almost a
half of the total parts. The following portions were visual Correct article usage
apply
arts
and theater
in which Change the spelling
theatre
theater
was Change the spelling
theatre
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different Change the word
slightly
of
its Change preposition
from
portion
with visual arts
. Lastly
with small
slice was literature. In 2005, Correct article usage
a small
however
, both theater
and music had Change the spelling
theatre
similar
Correct article usage
a similar
portion
, it was not more than Fix the agreement mistake
portions
third-fourth
each. Correct article usage
a third-fourth
Moreover
, visual arts
and literature had similar
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the similar
a similar
part
and if both were calculated, Fix the agreement mistake
parts
then
the total of portions would not similar as
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to
theater
.
Turning Change the spelling
theatre
at
the Change preposition
to
second
graph, there was a dramatic rise in all types of arts
events (except visual arts
). In fact, the highest number of people joined
Correct pronoun usage
who joined
particular
event was music in the Correct article usage
a particular
year
1995 and 2005, about 125,000 and 150,000 respectively. The Fix the agreement mistake
years
second
biggest one was Add an article
the theater
a theater
theater
where in both years were just under 100,000. Visual Change the spelling
theatre
arts
and literature, however
, were not over than
50,000 Change preposition
apply
of
participants. From 1995 to 2005, the total of participants decreased slightly.Change preposition
apply
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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