The charts below show one government's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in Arts events in the same years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are two charts shown. The first chart compares the
portion
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cultures
and education spent government in 1995 and 2005, and the Fix the agreement mistake
culture
second
one is about the number of participants Linking Words
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Arts
Events in the same years.
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the first graph, there were 4 types of education and it can be clearly seen that there were significant changes in each category from 1995 to 2005. In the year 1995, music was the biggest Change preposition
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portion
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a
half of the total parts. The following portions were visual Correct article usage
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arts
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theater
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was Change the spelling
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arts
. Use synonyms
Lastly
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small
slice was literature. In 2005, Correct article usage
a small
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, it was not more than Fix the agreement mistake
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third-fourth
each. Correct article usage
a third-fourth
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a similar
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and if both were calculated, Fix the agreement mistake
parts
then
the total of portions would not similar Linking Words
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theater
.
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at
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second
graph, there was a dramatic rise in all types of Linking Words
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events (except visual Use synonyms
arts
). In fact, the highest number of people Use synonyms
joined
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who joined
particular
event was music in the Correct article usage
a particular
year
1995 and 2005, about 125,000 and 150,000 respectively. The Fix the agreement mistake
years
second
biggest one was Linking Words
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the theater
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theater
where in both years were just under 100,000. Visual Change the spelling
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participants. From 1995 to 2005, the total of participants decreased slightly.Change preposition
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