The given graphs provide information on the proportions of
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spending on the Arts in 1995 and 2005 and the number of participants in Arts events in the same years.
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literature had the lowest numbers.
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event increased, too, but not significantly.
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spending on visual arts suffered a major change – it decrease almost two times, Use synonyms
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the audience experienced only an incremental decline in its numbers.
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spent a little less money on it in 2005. Use synonyms
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public attendance here raised by about 30,000 people between 1995 and 2005.Correct article usage
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