The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
The ideas of elderly people about life are considered to be very traditional and conservative. For that reason, I totally agree that
such
opinions are less likely to help younger generations prepare for the Linking Words
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Older generations stick to the ideas that are not applicable in today's Use synonyms
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is true because the concepts that used to be important in the past, now have lost their significance. Meaning that, over the course of the history values of people Linking Words
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, decades ago family was the most important aspect of life, Linking Words
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it is replaced by career and economic success. Accept comma addition
however, now
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, if young people follow the beliefs of the past, they may not become successful.
One more point to consider is that the ideas of elderly people are often conservative. Linking Words
This
happens because they believe that they are still living in the past. They prefer to live according to their outdated principles since they were not able to adapt the modern Linking Words
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. In my opinion, if young people will follow Use synonyms
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conservative ideas, they may not be able to adapt to the drastically changing Linking Words
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Moreover
, traditional ideas often suppress innovative and creative thinking both of which are the most important skills of the future. Linking Words
Therefore
, traditional concepts are less likely to help younger generations prepare for the future.
In conclusion, I believe that the ideas of older generations are not suitable recourses for young people to prepare for modern life because they have lost their significance and cannot provide youngsters with the skills they may need in the future.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite