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The use of electronic media has a negative effect on personal relationships between people. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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A lot of people tend to spend more and more time with electronic gadgets. Communication, media are widespread all over the world.
However I
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However, I
 believe that the mass media are the main reason of ruining people’s relationship. People from different parts of the world are connected since the
first
 computer was launched. Electronic devices
such
 as computers, televisions, and phones are developing each day.
This
 provides human beings to communicate more quickly and easily. One beneficial example is social networking sites, which give a chance to meet new people or get to know more about their culture. Young people even may build relationships which grow into marriage. There are numerous efficient points from electronic media.
On the other hand
 mass media provides significant points towards personal relationship. Most people do not speak to each other due to overwhelmed life in online life. Individuals tend to make lots of friends on social networking sites rather than maintain relationships.
However elderly
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However, elderly
 people do not know how to use electronic media. They are the most vulnerable groups, who suffer from loneliness and lack of conversation. If someone spends a lot of time in front of the computer or phone it would damage individuals’ bond with the rest of their family. In conclusion, in the technological generation more people contribute their time and efforts to the electronic gadgets. The popularity of the electronic gadgets is growing rapidly,
therefore
 reducing a good effect of real communication. As human beings are more social creature media’s influence should be limited.
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