The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).
The diagram illustrates the process of creating
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compost as garden fertilizer out of recycled, organic waste materials
such
as leftover foods, newspapers and grasses. In general, there are five various steps that need to be followed meticulously in order to come up with
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compost. To start with, a 2 cubic meter plastic container, with air vents on each side of its body, should be available.
This
will serve as a basin wherein the compost will be kept for processing.
This
receptacle should be
then
filled with the organic waste at an accurate measurement and order. First would be the container should be filled up with the waste food at 15cm in height from the bottom, followed by 15cm of grass and
finally
, newspapers on top not exceeding the
second
air vent. The
third
process would be incorporating nitrogen into the mixture and it should be noted that water can be put
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if the climate is hot. After that,
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fourth step, the container should be kept closed and wait for 6 months to allow decomposition to take place. It can be seen that during
this
stage, the heat vaporizes and it escapes from the air vents located on the sides of the plastic receptacle.
Finally
, after 6 months of waiting, fertilizer is produced and is ready for use in the garden.
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