The illiterate of the 21st century will not be those who cannot read and write, but those who cannot learn, unlearn and relearn. Agree or disagree?

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Can you imagine the world without education in nowadays

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I think it would be difficult

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people would seem like animals

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One of the best process is learning something new

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We have to learn every day because everything is changing by the day.

Also we

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Also, we

can find people without knowledge and we call them as an illiterate.

Even meaning

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The Even meaning

this

word changed as Alvin Toffler said the illiterate of the 21th century will not be those who cannot read or write

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but those who cannot learn

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unlearn and relearn

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I absolutely agree with

this

statement, because everything

is enable

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enables

to learn

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In addition

, the world changing

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a speed of light

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It happened of course by virtue modern technology. By using modern things learning became really easy,

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, it has effects on employment.

For instance

, if we do not know

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the definition

a definition

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the translation

of words, it is not

problem

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a problem

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we do not have to look up from

dictionary

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the dictionary

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we just click online translator and get our result. One more example, If we want to eat or we do not know how to cook, we can open YOU TUBE and look there we can find

collection

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a collection

of receipts and master classes

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Instead

of going to cooking courses. Learning by modern technology made one thing, it is

online shopping

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an online shopping

and many malls

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stores require employers who familiar with internet knowledge

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However we

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can meet people who cannot write and read, despite

this

they want to learn new things

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These people can always survive in every situation by their talent or techniques. Here I want

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to give

one example

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school life. At school there students who know everything and who get

high grade

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high grades

a high grade

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there

of them or themselves

their

students who are not good at subjects

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The searches showed that these students who were not good at subjects have more probability being successful than

honor

bestow honor or rewards upon

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students. It is right because that students who cannot study well

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they fail many times

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then

learn to survive.

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learn to make good communication by cheating and so on. To sum up, I want to say education is

treasure

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a treasure

which we can save forever. I

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think the person who cannot learn ready thing is real illiterate

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Never stop learning because It is never stops teaching.

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The illiterate of the 21st century will not be those who cannot read and write, but those who cannot learn, unlearn and relearn. Agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

With the development of technology, children are now living in a world that is different to what it was 50 years ago. What problems does this situation cause for society and family ?

Some people believe that tourists benefit from tourism, while others believe that such countries are negatively affected. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices would help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might be the case? What could be the disadvantages of self-employment?

Human activities have negative effects on the environment. Some people believe it is too late to take measures to prevent animals and plants from dying out. Others think actions should be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.