International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country that they visited. Do Advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, international travel is no longer a way of displaying a country’s

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has become an effective source of income, which can be considered leading one as by

visiting sightseeing

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visiting, sightseeing

cities of the host country tourists not only recreate themselves but, by doing

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, visitors spend part of their budget. Certainly, there appears to be some drawbacks emerging from

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process of making

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its plus points.

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will look at both advantages and disadvantages of

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matter. Let’s begin by looking at the positives of international tourism for both parties.

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, it is doubtful that international travel makes a great portion of

host country’s increasing economy

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the host country’s increasing economy

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, acclaiming Egyptian pyramids attract over millions of people across the world yearly owing to their magnificent and breathtaking views. Their ancient gods, which are over thousands of years make visitors feel as if they travel in time back to their times.

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, tourists often remember

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which they never regret using. They mostly tend to spend

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money

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on staying at hotels, buying goods with souvenirs and hire guides who help them have

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an unbelievable time

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, in its turn,

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directly to country’s finance. By looking at the other side of the argument, local

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intact cultural inheritance and local residents can be affected.

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, when tourists flood to sightseeing cites they tend to influence the fragile ancient infrastructures which have stood for ages. By their

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to some extend may cause noise pollution which might impact them. Another issue is that tourists can have a negative impression on local people when they overrun sights close to their homes.

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,

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cases are rare.

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, it is local people who benefit more from tourists, in terms of profit, as they mostly employed in

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the recreational business

at these sites. To conclude, not only host countries benefits from visitors but local population

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whose daily income is made up from catering tourists. So it seems convincing that

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the advantages

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the negative

of hosting visitors because primarily international tourism produce

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a greater proportion

of the hosting

counties

a politically organized body of people under a single government

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being irrefutable argument.