1. Nowadays, many people cannot read or write. What problems does this cause? What measures can governments take to solve these problems

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Over the past few years, there has been a serious issue in society that a large number of people in many countries all around the world are unable to read or write.
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essay will point out the possible reasons of
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problems
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problem
and
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suggest some effective solutions for the
authoritites
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
to handle it.
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of all, starting with the major causes of
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problem, it is conspicuous that the overpopulation can be seen as one of the main reasons which directly lead to
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issue. Without the limitations and
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proper birth-control, the sharp popularity of overpopulation is getting more and more prevalent that
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put the colossal burden on the
shouder
the part of the body between the neck and the upper arm
shoulder
shoulders
of public facilities and caused the lack of caring everyone, particularly poor people.
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, two countries with the largest population in the world is China and India, it is undeniable that the public curriculum of these countries might be overloaded and
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require more effort to teach everyone to know how to read and write.
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, another possible point can be counted is that the difficulties in teaching and conveying knowledge due to the geographic adversity. It is patently obvious that there might be a stumbling block for teachers or volunteers to help and teach children and residents who are living in
forest
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the forest
a forest
forests
or high mountains. Considering the potential measurements that governments could take to ease
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issue, the strict regulations regard to limiting the number of children in each household should be enacted. One of the most outstanding examples is China government, limiting only two children somewhat help
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country control the population in
short term
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the short term
a short term
.
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, it
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reduces the high pressure on the public curriculum.
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, there is no doubt that with the encouragement of authorities and the supporting of various organizations and individuals, the public projects would be established and organized to help children and people from all countries learn how to read and write. All in all, there are two clear reasons why many
peple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
are
unble
(usually followed by 'to') not having the necessary means or skill or know-how
unable
able
to read and write related to the tremendous pressure of overpopulation on public curriculum and
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the geographic problems. The potential actions can be taken by
government
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government, such
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as laws to control the population in the future or collaborate with other organizations and individuals to organize public projects that can help everyone learn how to read and write effectively.
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