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2. Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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 parents' responsibility. There are arguments on both sides of
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 and foremost, in order to have strong and trusting relationship with the children, the parents have to actively participate in children's life.
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, parents should spend a lot of time and show by their
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 what is good and what is bad, since children learn discipline and adopt these or those qualities of the parents.  
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, since parents are more involved in children's activities, they better understand their behaviour.
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, when children are on the wrong
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, it cannot be denied that teachers
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 play an important role in preparing students for the educational community.
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 is because they control their behaviour in school facilities.
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, some parents spend a lot of time at work and cannot follow them to see the negativity of their children, in
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 and control their habits. There are numerous examples when teachers helped students to be disciplined so that they would be successful in later life.   To sum up
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 we can say that
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 both teachers and parents are necessary in building good etiquette and behaviours for the future generations.
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