Nowadays parents are sending their children to trips abroad for educational purpose. What are the advantages and disadvantages to it.

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Educational trips have become a recent trend in curriculum of various schools. These days parents want their children to visit foreign lands and explore them.

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the benefits and downsides of the same and opine that the profits outweighs the drawbacks. Educational tour is bewitching since they enrich cultural exchanges. Children learn different cultures

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and innovations around the globe that helps to broaden their horizons.

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the statistics of Midwest high school reveal that children who participated in the foreign travel program did substantially well in general awareness test contrary to those who did not participate in the same. Yet the drawbacks of these tours cannot be overlooked. Educational trips usually cost a lot to parents as many times the organisations do not sponsor or partly sponsor the programs. Since these programs are not compulsory and the decision to attend is in the hands of parents

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or dreary at the parent's end to sponsor the tours. The data from Fidelity tours and travels revealed that the number of participants decreases if the cost of travel increases. In conclusion, educational trips are beneficial to children, but they should be advantageous and affordable as well.

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Nowadays, many people find it difficult to balance their work and personal lives. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees achieve a better work-life balance?

Maths plays a vital role in a business' success. Agree/disagree?

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