Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that children should be taught in schools how to play good role in

society

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, while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

think that parents should do

this

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.

However

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,

this

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issue is not entirely straightforward, and

agruments

a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true

arguments

could be made against the idea.

This

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essay will discuss both opinions and give a concluding view.

To begin

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with, those who support the idea that schools should learn how children ought to

behaive

behave in a certain manner; show a certain behavior; conduct or comport oneself

behave

in

society

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cite various aspects.

Firstly

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, supporters

claim

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claims

that children are the most time of their day at school and

communocate

transmit information

communicate

with other children and teachers.

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, teachers should play a role model and explain why and how

child

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a child

the child

children

must be a member of

society

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. Examples could be seen in Russia

where

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

were

in schools there are special lectures on which children are taught moral principles in

society

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. According to opponents of

this

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position they point out that parents must influence on their

childen

a young person of either sex

children

and educate how to be

good citizen

Suggestion

good citizens

a good citizen

. It is considered that parents are responsible for

actions

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the actions

and behaviour of their children.

Furhtermore

in addition

Furthermore

, parents have more influence and respect than teachers among children.

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Also before

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Also, before

entering at school children spend a lot of time with parents and being in pre-schooling and in-schooling

age they

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age, they

try to

obserb

become imbued

absorb

observe

all negative and positive

apects

a distinct feature or element in a problem

aspects

of behaviour in

society

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.

Threfore in

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Therefore, in

Therefore in

early stage

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the early stage

of life of

child

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children

a child

, without a doubt, parents ought to affect and direct how to be

good member

Suggestion

a good member

good members

of

society

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. Overall, it seems to me that school is a great place where children could obtain

knoweledge

the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

and practical skills to right act in

society

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, but parents are the role model for children and

schould

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

teach them being

right person

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the right person

in

society

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.