Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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we must teach them how to be competitive with others,

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others think that cooperation gives rise to a more helpful person.

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essay believes that

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competition leads to hard work, cooperation makes children more social. On the one hand, competitive young individuals are hard workers.

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means they do not accept being in second place under any circumstances, so they spend more hours studying or practising in order to improve themselves and overcome their weaknesses.

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, in my country, many young athletes are constantly told by their trainers that they must be better than everyone else, and

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is used to motivate them to work harder.

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, I believe that

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results in strong workers but not necessarily empathy toward others.

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, when teaching young people how to cooperate with each other,

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will make them more social. Children who learn to work smoothly with everyone and help them if they need it will grow up with the ability to be good citizens in the community.

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, in many developed countries, young students at primary schools are taught to be helpful and to be team players. I believe

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is more beneficial for the individual and society. In conclusion,

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essay believes that developing a sense of cooperation in youth is more beneficial for individuals and communities than fostering a sense of competition.