The news media have to much influence on people's lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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The more developed technology become, the more widespread of news media we have. The advanced news media

has aroused

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have aroused

a source of controversy that whether news media bring to much adverse effect on the world’s development. Speaking

from

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for

myself, I am not completely

conviced

persuaded of; very sure

convinced

with

this

point of view. It is undeniable that mass media has brought a lot of enormous benefits to mankind. It is an indispensable part of human life. Thanks to the news media, people are able to know the forecast weather and bring

umbrella

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an umbrella

along them whenever they go out if it will rain. New media allows human to update the latest news regularly

everyday

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every day

. Before the invention of media, the knowledge of human about everything around the world is really limited. Nowadays, media

facilitates

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facilitate

us to be well-informed about

cultures

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the cultures

and traditions of different countries. Everyone can know more about the common trend in the world, globalisation and it is very easy for all of them to be

integrate

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integrated

with foreign friends.

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In a nutshell
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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The news media have to much influence on people's lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

some cities create new housing for their growing population by constructing a smaller number of high-rise buildings. other cities create more of low-rise building. which solution is better. in your opinion?

Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many people are opting to buy second handed products instead of new ones. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?