The news media have to much influence on people's lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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The more developed technology become, the more widespread of news media we have. The advanced news media

has aroused

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have aroused

a source of controversy that whether news media bring to much adverse effect on the world’s development. Speaking

from

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for

myself, I am not completely

conviced

persuaded of; very sure

convinced

with

this

point of view. It is undeniable that mass media has brought a lot of enormous benefits to mankind. It is an indispensable part of human life. Thanks to the news media, people are able to know the forecast weather and bring

umbrella

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an umbrella

along them whenever they go out if it will rain. New media allows human to update the latest news regularly

everyday

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every day

. Before the invention of media, the knowledge of human about everything around the world is really limited. Nowadays, media

facilitates

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facilitate

us to be well-informed about

cultures

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the cultures

and traditions of different countries. Everyone can know more about the common trend in the world, globalisation and it is very easy for all of them to be

integrate

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integrated

with foreign friends.

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Finally
In a nutshell
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Introduction & conclusion present

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The news media have to much influence on people's lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Many people argue that free public transportation should be available in most major cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this idea?

Some people believe that students should be taught International news as a subject at schools. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In some area of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at the night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?