Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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celebrities
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most famous
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Celebrities are
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So I think that being a celebrity is not a any kind of problem according to my prospectus the celebrity's have huge of advantages
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The eminent personalities do so many
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They do advertisement and good movies which show impact on people who follow the film city.
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public scrutiny
  • Intrusive
  • Endorsements
  • Sponsorships
  • Financial security
  • High-profile collaborations
  • Social influence
  • Philanthropic efforts
  • Trust issues
  • Mental health challenges
  • Substance abuse
  • Pressures of celebrity
  • Expectations
  • Disconnect from reality
  • Normalcy
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