Do you think English will remain to be a global despite globalization ?

#english #globalization

English became the world

language

. If, we think about the future of

this

language

so answer is obvious. English will not lose value or authority around the world despite globalization. Because of it is

international

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an international language

the international language

language

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it is the main

language

in Olympic games, and all announcements in English in international places.

First

of all

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fact nowadays

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fact, nowadays

approximately 1.5 billion people speak in English

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In the world

totally

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total

there are 195

countries and

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countries, and

in these countries English is spoken For his reason it became international

language

Likewise

, the modern technology requires knowledge of English, because most companies producing commodities` instruction in English so it has main role

also

in the business field.

Secondly

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in improving English Olympic Games has a main role

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The

incorporates

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incorporating

chose English as a main

language

because it is easy to translate and especially grammar is easier to compare with other languages

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Also

, over 90% OF academic articles published in English

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Meanwhile

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English has importance

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communication and it is a major thing for every

county

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county, for

for example

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tourism or international meetings. For

this

reason

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It is

second

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the second language

a second language

language

in international public places

such

as international airports

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residence

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and conference halls

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Finally

English is

global

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a global language

the global language

language

as most of business transaction

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international gatherings

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trading and so on

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For

thus

reason

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the reason

I think English will not lose worth in the universe and controversy it will become more popular.

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