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You have to travel from on place to another write a letter to the bus director for a Travel Permission l

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Travel
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 permission request from
Hyderabad
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 to
Hubli
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 on 29-May-20 My name is Mayuri O Connor, 25Years old and I am a resident of
Hubli
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,
Karnataka
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, I hereby, wanted to bring to your kind notice that I had travelled to
Hyderabad
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 on 10-March-20 to visit my parents after a long time and unfortunately got stranded
due to
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 the lockdown in
Hyderabad
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 since
then
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.
Therefore
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, I am writing to make an appeal to the
Karnataka
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 state Govt to kindly consider my request of
travel
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 on the mentioned date and allow me to
travel
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 back to my husband’s house in
Hubli
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 on 29-May-20 via flight to
Hubli
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. Details of my
travel
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: Depart from:
Hyderabad
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 Arrival to: Belgaum Date: 29-May-20 Cell: 9845569527 I hereby, substantiate and pledge to adhere to the state guidelines of
Karnataka
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 by downloading the ArogyaSetu app and assure to take complete precautions
while
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 arriving to the airport and shall home quarantine oneself for 14days. Thanks in advance to the
Karnataka
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 Govt for the smooth facilitation ahead. Thanks & sincerest regards Yours truly, Mayuri O’ Connor
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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