You have to travel from on place to another write a letter to the bus director for a Travel Permission l

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Sub:

Travel

permission request from

Hyderabad

Hubli

on 29-May-20 My name is Mayuri O Connor, 25Years old and I am a resident of

Hubli

Karnataka

, I hereby, wanted to bring to your kind notice that I had travelled to

Hyderabad

on 10-March-20 to visit my parents after a long time and unfortunately got stranded

due to

the lockdown in

Hyderabad

since

then

Therefore

, I am writing to make an appeal to the

Karnataka

state Govt to kindly consider my request of

travel

on the mentioned date and allow me to

travel

back to my husband’s house in

Hubli

on 29-May-20 via flight to

Hubli

. Details of my

travel

: Depart from:

Hyderabad

Arrival to: Belgaum Date: 29-May-20 Cell: 9845569527 I hereby, substantiate and pledge to adhere to the state guidelines of

Karnataka

by downloading the ArogyaSetu app and assure to take complete precautions

while

arriving to the airport and shall home quarantine oneself for 14days. Thanks in advance to the

Karnataka

Govt for the smooth facilitation ahead. Thanks & sincerest regards Yours truly, Mayuri O’ Connor

Submitted by steffyoconnor on Wed May 27 2020

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4Word repetition
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1 paragraphs

176 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have to travel from on place to another write a letter to the bus director for a Travel Permission l

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drink that has been scientifically proved to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?

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