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In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience .

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In
this
 generation, most of the young people have less spare
time
, and most of the young people are pressurized to work harder in their education. In my opinion, the main reasons for
this
 would be the competition in the outside world.
However
, in the young age, people should get some leisure
time
 to get socially active.
This
 kind of hurdles has few solutions one of them would be
time
 management. Though, the education is important for every young person, the institutions and schools have to maintain some strategic plan and make things easier for students. Institutions could make few things online, where students feel comfortable and easier to work for their studies.
Furthermore
, the students could benefit by providing them 50% of online classes, online assignments and by reducing the school hours. By doing
this
, students can manage their leisure
time
 and study
time
. Students could gather relevant information from the internet regarding their studies or assignments. Taking me as an example, I am a 90's kid, at the
time
 of our education there was no
such
 technology. We are forced to go to school, work hard more and used to study 10 - 12 hours every day.
In addition
 to
this
, we used to go for tuition of some particular subjects.
This
 is because, we were totally dependent on hand written books which were provided by the school board. We hardly used to get
time
 to play, spend
time
 with friends, but we used gain lot knowledge by doing verbal interaction with friends and elders.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • high expectations
  • academic success
  • future success
  • competitive nature
  • modern education systems
  • top grades
  • prestigious universities
  • high-paying jobs
  • rise of technology
  • social media platforms
  • physical activities
  • relaxation
  • extracurricular demands
  • multiple responsibilities
  • economic factors
  • lower-income families
  • part-time jobs
  • academic pressures
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