Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success while other think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which of all factors, do you think are most important?

Generally people think that economic growth is the only factor that can measure a country'
progress
. But as quoted by the famous leader Mr. Ban Ki-moon
from
Suggestion
of
South Korea that "Sustainable development is the pathway to the future we want for all. It offers a framework to generate economic growth, achieve social justice,
exercise environmental
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exercise, environmental
stewardship and strengthen governance." Apart from
economy
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the economy
, there are certain other factors that need to be taken into consideration.
Firstly
, human beings today
need
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needs
to have a specific set of skills to survive in
this
competitive world as well as
progress
and
this
article shows the importance of education in a country’s
progress
. Whether it is a simple thing like using water sparingly or taking a bus to work
instead
of using the bike or car in order to save fuel, the educated mass knows how to contribute towards the country’s well-being. One of the reasons for their awareness is because they have been taught these values in school, colleges and work places. People who aren’t educated don’t have clues about these facts as they haven’t been in a learning environment.
Secondly
, health is
also
a key indicator of a country’s
progress
. A nation with a healthy population is more likely to experience sustained growth. Good health is
also
essential for the stability of entire regions, as pandemics, which transcend borders, can have severe social and economic impacts on families and communities, and can put increased pressure on health systems.
Thirdly
, Safety and Security
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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