We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent do you advertisement influence our choices as a customer and what effect does it have on our lifestyle? discuss the issue and give your opinion give reason for your answer with examples.

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Nowadays marketing and advertising control customers in the way that producers need. Some people hold the opinion that consumerism exists only because of strongly managing product promotion and affects poorly on
customers
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customers'
way of life.
Moreover
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, artificially increased consumption has a lot of negative consequences on the environment.
However
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,
commercial
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the commercial
might have
positively influence
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a positive influence
positive influence
on society. The main reason why marketing is
such
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popular tool on today's market is that manufacturers have researched
customers
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customer
customers'
behaviour clearly and learnt to manage it by a myriad psychological
tricks
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trick
.
For example
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, super-markets use lighting to highlight
goods
any substance that can be metabolized by an animal to give energy and build tissue
foods
that want to sell faster.
Additionally
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, shops use smells, colours of
walls
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the walls
and carpet
to
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of
zone space and attract clients.
As a result
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, all
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this
plural of "this"
these
tips work as a knock-on-effect and force visitors to buy more expensive and useless stuff which is only a tip of the iceberg. Because of consumerism communities spend natural resources unthinkingly and it could
leads
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lead
to
shortage
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a shortage
of food, water
and to environmental pollution
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and environmental pollution
.
On the other hand
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, advertisement today uses not only to sell products, but to attract society's attention to world problems
such
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as global warming or the problem of animal extinction.
For instance
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, excellent promotion of pandas lifestyle helped to collect donations and allowed them to survive.
Also
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publicity works with people in need or with difficult illnesses.
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, it is important to run promotions as a quick fix of world problems
such
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as global warming, oceans pollution and wildfires. To conclude, the question of advertisement effect on people's life is the difficult one to answer definitively.
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, based on reasons analysed above, I believe that promotion is a strong instrument which could manage
customers
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customer
customers'
behaviour and affects not only on
person's way
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a person's way
of life but on the environment in general.
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