Many agricultural lands are being converted into commercial centres. How does this affect the environment and the people’s life style? Discuss this situation and provide suggestions to address these issues. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

In recent decades, we are facing many environmental issues. One of them is that a lot of

lands

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land

for agriculture are being transformed to commercial places. Actually, from what I experienced, the town I live in was agricultural lands. But it was converted into residential, facilities and shopping malls due to the benefit of the money value.

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However to

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However, in

However in

my mind, I think that the drawbacks overweight the benefits in

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situation. So in

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essay, I will suggest the problems of

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occasion and the way to resolve them.

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of all, the main problem is that the job for as a farmer is declined. The spaces for

farm

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the farm

are changed to shopping malls so there

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is

the lake of

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the farm

.

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, it makes farmers

not to work

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don't work

anymore. And

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the bigger issue

is that it affects their lives. Because they

can not

can not

cannot

work no more, their revenue is decreased and it makes their life hard.

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, as the fruits and foods from agriculture are

also

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depleted, we have to depend on more import. The solution to resolve

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is to preserve and develop

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the lands

.

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, they can get the profit and the happy life.

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, it destroys the habitats for animals. As the nature

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of

them is being converted, they lose their home.

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, it can lead to the extinction of

creatures

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the creatures

. Actually, according to a recent study, it shows that there are many endangered animals because of

significant decline

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a significant decline

significant declines

the significant decline

of their settles. In my thought, it can be resolved by making parks for them or preserving the nature. To make many

parks is going

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parks, go

parks go

to help them not damaged. To sum up, I believe that to change the fields

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of

agriculture to commercial

centers

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centres'

bring many negative effects, so we have to preserve them.