Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success while other think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which of all factors, do you think are most important?

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Generally people think that economic growth is the only factor that can measure a country' progress. But as quoted by the famous leader Mr. Ban Ki-moon of South Korea that "Sustainable development is the pathway to the future we want for all. It offers a framework to generate economic growth, achieve social justice, exercise, environmental stewardship and strengthen governance." Apart from the economy, there are certain other factors that need to be taken into consideration.
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, human beings today needs to have a specific set of skills to survive in
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competitive world as well as grow. Whether it is a simple thing like using water sparingly or taking a bus to work
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of using the bike or car to save fuel, the educated mass knows how to contribute towards nation’s well-being. One of the reasons for their awareness is because they have been taught these values in school, colleges and work places. People who aren’t educated don’t have clues about these facts as they haven’t been in a learning environment.
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, health is
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a significant point for a country’s progress. A nation with a healthy population is more likely to experience sustained growth. Good health is
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essential for the stability of entire regions, as pandemics, which transcend borders, can have severe social and economic impacts on families and communities, and can put increased pressure on health systems.
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, safety and security are very essential for every citizen in any country. Crime is growing at a fast pace. Rapes, murder, robbery, women trafficking, infanticide, honour killing, domestic violence and so many other issues have devastated the society. If these issues are not resolved and proper justice is not done on time,
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the nation has to suffer.
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, for security the government need to be vigilant during construction. Correct materials need to be used for road, bridges and public buildings, any kind of discrepancy can lead to fatal accidents.
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, safety is another issue that has a great impact on the public. Fourthly, natural environment, in order to survive one has had more green and clean places. Deforestation has reduced the level of oxygen in the air, due to which people have started facing breathing problems. Air and noise have
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increased
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increased because the maximum crowd travels by their own private vehicles. Even the river and oceans are getting contaminated, many chemical companies dispose their hazardous waste in them. An Eco friendly environment is mandatory for a prosperous future.
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but not the least, gender equality. Even today there is discrimination between men and women. Both need to be given equal rights and opportunities to prove themselves and contribute equally.
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, I believe that education is the key indicator for a developing nation. It spreads awareness among public. It is a bliss in disguise, since only a literate person can decide whom to vote for in order to make a difference in the economy. Being educated helps in deciding why to vote for a particular party over the other. College graduates are paid much more than those without a college degree and continue to support the economy well by paying more taxes and purchasing more goods.
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is the cure for extreme poverty and the higher the level of literacy the more a country can progress. To ensure that there are equal opportunities for everyone regardless of race, gender or social class, equal access to education is necessary. When girls live in fear, it deters them from going to school, so education of the population helps change people’s mindset, which will discourage violence.
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