You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am John Kane, I have been recently shortlisted as React Js Developer in your company (XYZ). As we discussed in an interview process that I would join your firm on 15th November. I am writing

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mail to inform you that unfortunately, I would not be able to present on that date. As I informed you during my interview process that I have 15 days of the employment notice period in my current company so that I can complete my pending tasks and hand

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to my colleagues and seniors. But I got sick for a few days,

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, I was not able to finish the tasks. I was on bed rest during

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time. If you want,

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I can forward my medical reports and tests. To clear my backlogs created with my late start, I can ensure that I will work for at least two extra hours each day. I feel responsible for the pressure created in the company due to my late start. So, I will work harder until everything gets normal. I sincerely apologize for

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inconvenience and hope for a good start in the future. If you need any medical proof or letter,

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please let me know. Yours faithfully, John Kane

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

210 words

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