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Some parents send their children to preschool when they are three or four years old. Other parents wait until their children are old enough for primary school before they send them to school. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of sending children to preschool at a young age.

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There are
children
 who attend preschool by their parent’s decision when they are three or four years old .
This
 matter
withstand
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 advantage and disadvantage criteria. In my opinion,
the
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most
of
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child
 development
take
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a
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place in preschool.
as well as
 ,
the
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 safe environment .
on
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 the contrary, it creates a
distant
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 between the
parents
 and their
children
. preschool is a constructive place
when
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child
 development can manifest, and attract the skills
in
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 an early age. Communication and social skills with
children
 can give the young individual a boost of
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.
In addition
, physical activities and interaction with sports can help the
child
 grow
healthy
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, active day.
Safe
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 place , preschool offers
the
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parents
 who are busy in their working day a good, secure environment for their
children
.
Furthermore
 ,
a
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well trained
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 teachers who are capable of handling all
type
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 of urgent needs of the
children
 in the facility.
therefore
,
parent’s
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 can
insure
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 that their
children
 are in safe hands .
Although
 preschool can handle safety and teaching
aspect
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 for the
children
, It has
it’s
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 disadvantages .
firstly
,
distant
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distance
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 from the
parents
 ,
as well as
 less time
spending
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 in the house which are unfortunate
thing
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 to have.
Also
, that problem
create
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 a gap between the family ;
therefore
 , weakening the connection in the house . The decision
of enrolling
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children
 in a preschool
in
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at
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 an early age is a major step in
the
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modern life .
although
 it can carry a good amount of advantages for the
child
 and their
parents
 , it can withstand a lot of disadvantages in their family lives.
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