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Modern cultures around the world have become similar when compared to the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

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It is true that eating
sugar
 in excess amount can lead to different health problems like diabetes and obesity.
Although
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some might argue that it is the responsibility of the government to take the liability of their citizens' well-being, while some others believe that the individuals should take care of their fitness by themselves.I firmly believe that self care is really important for a person to maintain his fitness. Some critics argue that, the state can control the over consumption of
sugar
 among the public by imposing higher taxes on carbohydrate and sugary products.An example is, if the authority escalates the tax on these products, their selling price will be increased and some people may hesitate to buy
sugar
.
Therefore
 the usage of
sugar
 will reduce automatically among the public.
Besides
, the ministry can introduce some awareness programs to educate the public about the adverse effect of excess
sugar
 in intake.
As a result
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 people may try to reduce their carbohydrate intake, and they can share information with his family and friends.
On the other hand
, people have different lifestyle and eating habit.So Self awareness is more important for a person to maintain his well-being. To give an idea example, if someone has a family history of diabetes, he should consume a limited amount of carbohydrate than the others because at high risk of diabetes.
Furthermore
, these days, many carbohydrate-free products are available in the market
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and these are healthy options for the public to maintain and control their glucose intake. To conclude, while it can be argued that too much emphasis is placed on the state to maintain public health, my own opinion is that it is the responsibility of the individual to take care their fitness.
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