Old people believe that traditional activities are more beneficial whereas adults believe that advanced activities are more beneficial than other. give your opinion.

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Elders think that their heritage activities are beneficial more, what now adults think that new and development activities are being far better
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essay I would like to express my point of view and provide with relevant examples.
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, In the old days, I believe there were not much activity as compared to now, but the activities done that, generation where need more
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and hard work to do it, as they didn'
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have new technology.
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, farming in old days was really hard, it would take a lot of
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to do it, as they had to cut the crop's by hand. But due to
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, people had really good health as it keeps them in good shape. All the traditional activities were good and peoples use to be happy doing it as it shows their culture. Due to
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action and what effort is taken to do them, there were less cases of disease as their body are every
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active.
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, in studying it shows the life span of humans were very long in our elders'
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, but if compared to present it is drop down a lot.
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, with growing generation and development everyone is busy with their work growth and they don'
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get engaged in activity, which affect our lives in the long run.
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, In a study it shows, nowadays there is a high number of obesity as compared to 90s or before that as there is a lack of activity. Well new tech had made our life easy and help us to do many difficult tasks with ease, but I think that reduce the fun of it.
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, GYM and all the equipments in it help people to do different activities, but only a few stick to it and get benefited, but the vast majority don'
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get it benefit, that can be due to lack of
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or passionate. To summarize, Both have its own pros and cons, we can'
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go back to old day's and how the activities were done, but we could not neglect them as it
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also remind
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us about our culture and tradition,
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as cultural dance, but now peoples are more into modern dance. If we loss sight of tradition,
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it would be lost forever. So, at the end whenever we get an opportunity we should do ones in a while, traditional activities as it will teach even our coming generation.
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