Old people believe that traditional activities are more beneficial whereas adults believe that advanced activities are more beneficial than other. give your opinion.

Elders think that their heritage activities are beneficial more, what now adults think that new and development activities are being far better
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
the other. In
this
essay I would like to express my point of view and provide with relevant examples.
Firstly
, In the old days, I believe there were not much activity as compared to now, but the activities done that, generation where need more
time
and hard work to do it, as they didn'
t
have new technology.
For example
, farming in old days was really hard, it would take a lot of
time
to do it, as they had to cut the crop's by hand. But due to
this
, people had really good health as it keeps them in good shape. All the traditional activities were good and peoples use to be happy doing it as it shows their culture. Due to
this
action and what effort is taken to do them, there were less cases of disease as their body are every
time
active.
For instance
, in studying it shows the life span of humans were very long in our elders'
time
, but if compared to present it is drop down a lot.
Secondly
, with growing generation and development everyone is busy with their work growth and they don'
t
get engaged in activity, which affect our lives in the long run.
For example
, In a study it shows, nowadays there is a high number of obesity as compared to 90s or before that as there is a lack of activity. Well new tech had made our life easy and help us to do many difficult tasks with ease, but I think that reduce the fun of it.
For example
, GYM and all the equipments in it help people to do different activities, but only a few stick to it and get benefited, but the vast majority don'
t
get it benefit, that can be due to lack of
time
or passionate. To summarize, Both have its own pros and cons, we can'
t
go back to old day's and how the activities were done, but we could not neglect them as it
also remind
Suggestion
also reminds
us about our culture and tradition,
such
as cultural dance, but now peoples are more into modern dance. If we loss sight of tradition,
then
it would be lost forever. So, at the end whenever we get an opportunity we should do ones in a while, traditional activities as it will teach even our coming generation.
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