Question: In order to prevent Covid-19 pandemic from spreading, many extreme measures have been taken such as quarantine, isolation, social distancing, which had significant impacts on different sectors, especially education due to school closure. In such a context, many people suggest that GCSE exam should be abolished to relieve the burden on students and the whole society. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this suggestion. What is your opinion?
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Amidst the
coronavirus
pandemic, a wide range of crackdowns Suggestion
such
as quarantine, isolation and social distancing has been applied so as to halt the virus’s spread, Linking Words
thus
exerting significant influences on various sectors, typically education Linking Words
as a result
of Linking Words
school closure
. There are suggestions that the annual Suggestion
school closures
a school closure
GCSE
examination should be abolished to ease the Use synonyms
presssure
over students and the whole society. While some downsides might be associated with the force applied to a unit area of surface; measured in pascals (SI unit) or in dynes (cgs unit)
pressure
pressures
this
idea, I believe that the upside is still worth taking into account.
On the one hand, the suggestion appears to be disadvantageous to some certain extent. The main shortcoming is that the educational system may not be flexible enough to come up with other vehicles for Linking Words
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graduation but
the Accept comma addition
graduation, but
GCSE
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exam
if Use synonyms
this
were to be eliminated. As in a range of countries, Linking Words
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paper-delivering exams as the Linking Words
GCSE
have always been the main means for Use synonyms
graduation
, there are hardly any other methods for evaluating the students’ overall ability to substitute for it, Use synonyms
therefore
rendering it much harder to single out excellent graduates if Linking Words
this
type of Linking Words
exam
is abolished. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, even Linking Words
such
abolition can deteriorate the stress and confusion over students rather than alleviate them. As students has been faced with too much chaos caused by the virus, Linking Words
such
a sudden change could worsen the situation for those who have been preparing for three consecutive years just to get the most out of Linking Words
this
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GCSE
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exam
.
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On the other hand
, I believe that the advantages of Linking Words
this
abolition are still of greater significance. Linking Words
First
and foremost, safety from viral infection is the top priority during the pandemic. Linking Words
Accordingly
, as long as activities which require large-scale gatherings Linking Words
such
as the Linking Words
GCSE
Use synonyms
exam
are cancelled, cross infection will be less likely to happen. Use synonyms
Secondly
, the abolition of Linking Words
GCSE
Use synonyms
exam
may provide the Use synonyms
educational
department with opportunities to come up with new methods for Suggestion
education
graduation
which would need no gathering while still bring out the most proper results. Use synonyms
Such
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rennovations
can a creation (a new device or process) resulting from study and experimentation
innovations
then
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applied
permanently in the future as the main assessment for students’ Suggestion
apply
graduation
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the amount of Linking Words
money which
is usually allocated to organizing the Accept comma addition
money, which
exam
can now be used for other essential sectors Use synonyms
such
as the economy, health services and the like. By doing Linking Words
this
, a nation’s fight against the Linking Words
coronavirus
could be Suggestion
strengthen
substantially Suggestion
strengthened
on
the long run.
In conclusion, while it seems to me that abolishing the Suggestion
in
GCSE
Use synonyms
exam
may bring about certain drawbacks, these are still outweighed by the undeniable benefits.Use synonyms
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