despite advances in agriculture, many people in the world are still hungry. Why is this so? what are the likely solutions

Despite improvement in agriculture, a lot of people all over the world still starve.
This
essay will
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
why
this
is so and propose a solution. Unarguably there has been a boost in agriculture in terms of technology and infrastructure,
nonetheless
, many people are still hungry. A major culprit to
this
trend is shortage in food supply as demands
far exceeds
Suggestion
far exceed
supply; only a fraction of the populace embrace farming. How can the resulting produce feed the ever growing population? In a recent survey done by prof.
Marculey
N.
of
Suggestion
Of
Federal university of Technology Mina on involvement of Agricultural practices among
house holds
a social unit living together
households
in the six geopolitical zones Nigeria, a shocking
out come
something that results
outcome
of 21% did one farming method or the other. Little wonder why people still go hungry in recent times. Another cause of starvation is
persistent increase
Suggestion
a persistent increase
in industrialization as lands are no longer available for cultivation, resulting in to excessive use of existing farmlands. Traditional method of
fallowing
about to be mentioned or specified
following
allowing
to improve soil quality is no longer practiced and
consequently
, there is
poor harvest
Suggestion
a poor harvest
leading to food shortage and hunger. To curb
this
menace, the government at all levels must initiate and sustain a 'Live Green' initiative where every household should be encouraged to plant a tree and keep gardens. Financial grants
such
as loans should be accorded to young graduates to make farming attractive, while enormous lands should be allotted solely for agricultural purposes. In summary
,
Accept space
,
while inadequate food production resulting from lack of motivation and unavailability of farming spaces
are
Suggestion
is
the major cause of hunger, provision of financial support and allocation of land for agricultural purposes will cushion
this
effect.
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