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only Money can bring happiness. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

#money #happiness
Nowadays
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 people believe that
money
 can bring happiness because with
money
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
 people can
persue
carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
parse
peruse
 everything like
big house
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a big house
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car and even they can travel around the world
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However
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 I strongly disagree with others
opinon
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
 because there are many things and problems which
money
 can not solve
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Firstly
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 rich people may buy some things in their
live but
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lives, but
lives but
life but
 they can not buy live of close people
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 And there many times when rich people become
wealthy but
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wealthy, but
 they lose their friends
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 parents
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 So
this
facts
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fact
show
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shows
 that
money
 is not the thing which can solve live problems
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Moreover
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 there are many rich people who do not have children
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 but they have time and they want to spend it with kids
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Secondly
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there are some people who do not have a lot of
money but
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money, but
 they have close people who always try to support them
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For example
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 they live in difficult
conditions but
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conditions, but
 they never regret because
of close knit family
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of a close knit family
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Furthemore
in addition
Furthermore
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 parents are happy as they have kids who will help them after
years so
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years, so
this
plural of "this"
these
 people are more happier than rich people who do not have kids
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 Some may argue that without
money
 people can become happier than rich
people but
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people, but
 close people are
predominat
most frequent or common
predominant
predominate
predominates
 in
such
 case
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 In
conlusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
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 I believe that
money
 is not
only thing
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the only thing
only things
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
 can bring happiness
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 Because it is difficult imagine life without close people who can motivate and support even in complicated moments
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