Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society , while other think that individuals can have a lot of influence . What is your opinion

It is believed that the minority of the people

supports

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support

the remarkable change in the society is managed only by the government, while other belief supports individuals impacted, and so they

have to change power

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have power to change

. I will briefly elaborate both on these views. In the modern time, there should be orientated and altered in the

society

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societal

dynamics. In order to adapt people to city life is the most essential thing ever had before.

For example

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, in the past time, many citizens

had not have

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had not had

a health insurance,

however

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they could be used general hospitals to treat illnesses. In today's world, the population which is increasing vastly in the major urban towns,

can not

can not

cannot

use enough services and asked

to

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of

them whether they have

an

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a

health insurance, only the patients who have insurance can access to the

heathycare

the preservation of mental and physical health by preventing or treating illness through services offered by the health profession

healthcare

professionals. To alleviate these types of disadvantages, not only the governments,

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every

people

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person

should be aware of the

dymamics

the branch of mechanics concerned with the forces that cause motions of bodies

dynamics

dynamic

and drawbacks.

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, if the

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

government's

motiviated

provided with a motive or given incentive for action

motivated

to the citizens to keep in peace and healthy, the society would be in a better place. Meanwhile,

oftenly

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, the authorities should ask some questions which

is

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are

requirement

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required

to eliminate something in the communities.

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, in my town, the municipality gave a survey to the

residents which

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residents, which

problems they faced with and their advice to solve them. After

this

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research, both of the managers and the citizens merged to create the possible solutions, and future precautions.

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to say, the best system is providing to join among the local managers for local residents. In conclusion, facilities and needs of modern time

is getting

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are getting

alter.

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, neither the managers nor the public is not

requirem

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required

require

for a

crutial

of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis

crucial

alternative. In my perspective, the best solution is acting all together as a developing community.