In some countries today, there is an attitude that ‘anyone can do it’ in the arts – music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree

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Currently, heated debates have been provoked concerning a problem that people do not need genuine talent to be prosperous in the field of art

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viewpoint totally unjustifiable and

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essay is going to shed light on some arguments against it. On the one hand, it is true that

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genuine talent, appearance is

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a key factor leading to success. As a matter of fact, nowadays, the talentless who are endowed with a gorgeous look possess a higher probability to draw the public attention, thereby earning vast amounts of money. Take Indonesia as a prime example, it is common knowledge there that singers, artists or actors who lack experience and competence still can guarantee the

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results of their products thanks to their gorgeous appearance.

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, it is reported that incompetent figures can be famous for a short time before disappearing as their mediocre performances gradually lose public prevalence.

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, I strongly subscribe to those arguing that talented artists are prioritized and appreciated by the public. To be specific, true artists who are either talent-trained or talent-born can both work professionally and be proficient

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bringing out numerous qualitative and superior performances in order to entertain people.

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, various stars

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as Vera Wang, Tiffany, Diana Ross and so on are well-known and wealthy as a deserving award for their genuine talent.

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, there are a plethora of tv shows as well as competitions held with a view to detecting thinly-veiled talents, which proves that genuine talents will always gain public preference. In conclusion, though several untalented people become wealthy and well-off, I hold the belief that the role of genuine talents can never be underestimated on account of their capacity as well as effort.

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Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and exercise everyday will be healthier and happier. However, many elderlies are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution.

In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. What is the cause? What can be done to deal with this.

In some parts of the world, it is increasingly popular to research the history of one’s own family. Why do people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?