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Some people say that all secondary and higher secondary school students should be taught how to manage money as it is an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree with this argument?

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It is indeed a fact that managing
money
 is an important skill of the life and it has to be acquired by every human being on
this
 earth.
This
 essay
agree
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agrees
 with the statement because adolescents learn the insights of financial
management
 and how to plan investments for
future
 goals. Learning how to manage
money
 is amazingly beneficial for high school children.
Firstly
, it is extremely good for their
future
, since they learn at a tender age; they will be able to manage their wealth properly and appropriately.
Second
, they can understand the value of
money
 and
hence
 they voluntarily reduce their unnecessary expenses, keep distance from bad habits and
also
 do not rush to their parents for extravagant demands.
Third they
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Third, they
also
 learn to budget their
money
 and in
such
 a state, they develop maturity, tolerance and
also give
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also gives
 more respect to their parents and guardians.
Finally
, insights about
money
management
 motivate children to pan funds for their
future
academics
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academic
 studies.
Consequently
, it
also
 greatly reduces the financial burden on their parents.
On the other hand
, learning
money
management
 at high school
also
 has some drawbacks.
Student
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A student
 at
this
 age are generally immature and most of them cannot grasp the subject properly.
Moreover
, at
this
 age, children need to pay more attention to the academic subjects. Adding one more subject will definitely increase their burden. To conclude, even though teaching financial
management
 at
high school level
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the high school level
 is difficult and may have some disadvantages of students disgracing from the studies. I firmly believe that it
ultimately help
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ultimately helps
 them in planning the financial aspects of their lives and leads them to be sincere, mature and capable citizen of the
future
.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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