Some people say that it is impossible to live comfortably in big cities. What problems are faced by the people living with in big cities? What solutions can be taken to solve those problems??
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appropriate ways
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essay will suggest that the principal cause of this
issue is enhance in the
migration from the rural areas and provides the jobs in Suggestion
is enhancing the
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is enhanced in the
backwardness
area as a viable solution followed by a reasoned conclusion.
The main cause of the bad conditions of living in the cities are being overcrowded. Due to lack of amenities in the rural area, people are moving to the metro cities. Suggestion
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,
traffic
is being increased. The volume of traffic
has raised the pollution in the towns. This
pollution leads to serious health issues like asthma, respiratory issues, heart diseases so forth. For example
, Delhi is most polluted city
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the most polluted city
in
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at
this
time .
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,
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, Delhi is the Suggestion
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city ,
where shop is Accept space
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opened
for buying the oxygen.
The main practical solution of Suggestion
open
this
problem is the government provides the facilities in the rural area. In this
way, people will less migrate into the cities. An effective advertising campaign could warn of the dangers of more vehicles and overuse of it snd
hopefully raise awareness amongst the public. The raised awareness of the problem would lead changes in the quality of living in the citiesin order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
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in china.
In summary, the current bad conditions of cities have been caused by migration and traffic
and with the help of adverts and appropriate policy on how to become healthy life in the citiesSubmitted by Navjot on
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